So I decided to do something I had thought about doing for a while. You take a page from a text and then, only using words from the text in the order they appear, you create a new text. You can do it with white out and end up with a strange counter narrative. I picked one of my all time favorite books, Rose in Bloom by Louisa May Alcott, and decided to start at the back and use the first page I came to with the word "heart" appearing on it. I started at the end cause it is all goopy there. Love me some Lousia May!
Anyway, page 344 is the end of the part where Rose and (spoiler) cousin Mac are at last acknowledging their love and how they will work to improve themselves for and with each other. These are the morals I raised myself with. I ended up creating four narratives from this page: two that I felt went directly against the story context, and two that greatly departed from the previous two. I insert them here for your perusal, in order of the last created to the first. Then you can see the pictures. Remember, if the language seems stilted, it is because I was very constrained.
A Poetic Request
My lamp is faulty. Will you come and try to make the glowing, beautiful, golden heart light and bloom?
When Greeting Cards Collide
Lift up and look well
Fly high to follow wings
Live the poetry
Celebrate your fame and be content
Be proud that inspiration comes from life
Work to make music and love
Go fervently in the sunshine, glowing with happiness
Make a folded heart bloom
Cupid’s Words
Cupid laughed in spite at the sentimental character. He said with seriousness, “It is too late. Love will have no fear. You will fly too high and my gift will no fame and inspiration work. Try to make music and leave behind fervent, glowing happiness. Hope, and make the heart bloom.”
Gwendolen and Grandcourt
Laughing in spite he said, “Look well for it is too late. Only a faulty love I have. Fear, because I have my will. You shall be only the wife and I’ll own the life of a nobleman. O! Try to leave!”
Looking at her, he stood there glowing with purpose. He felt that the last heart lay open.
He loomed…
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| Here is my copy of the book and my two white out versions. |
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| The original text should you care to squint at it. If you ever want to read this book remember to start with Eight Cousins, which is the beginning of the story of the Campbell cousins as children. I am pretty sure my maternal family was historically similar to this one. They were in the China trade as well and they liked to marry their cousins. |
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| I only did this for the pictures but it does clarify any mistakes in word order. |
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| This one amused me. I tried to make it mundane but the language would not cooperate. |
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| Check out his ampersands. This was an exciting night for the true love! |